exhaling beasts
and burdens
with gentle
calm breaths
consciousness
slowly dissipates
veil of silence
peacefully unfurls
alone and
surrounded
ecstasy ripples
from head to toe
freedom finally
realized
truth here
and now
exhaling beasts
and burdens
with gentle
calm breaths
consciousness
slowly dissipates
veil of silence
peacefully unfurls
alone and
surrounded
ecstasy ripples
from head to toe
freedom finally
realized
truth here
and now
love it
Thank you Paul. Glad to hear that you love this poem.
I love this, the solitary nature of existing, just breathing and letting existence wash everything else away. It’s good to remind oneself that all the mad things we do to make money and such are small compared to just appreciating nature and existence.
You get me Ste J, and I’m forever grateful that someone out there does. Thank you for your spot on comment. I hope that your travels are treating you well.
Despite not reading lots of poetry books, I do enjoy my blog jaunts through poetry and love to study and delve into the words presented. It helps that you are so visual in your words too, just in case I approach your site being a bit dense of head on a particular day. The travels are going exceedingly well, soon we will be figuring out our plans for life too so we can go ahead and really be where we want to be.