Thank you. I almost lost my mind this morning trying to make it just right. Even though all the poems in the collection are finished, I can’t help but tinker with them when publication day arrives. In the end, though, I think it came together well.
Look the river made of time and water
And remember that time is another river,
Know that we are lost as the river
And that faces go like water.
Jorge Luis Borges
You made me remember Borges with your letters
Cruz del Sur
Excellent poem, the truth in this speaks volumes. Nicely done.
Thank you. I almost lost my mind this morning trying to make it just right. Even though all the poems in the collection are finished, I can’t help but tinker with them when publication day arrives. In the end, though, I think it came together well.
it is a ….no words can say. that good it is .
Thank you very much. You are too kind.
Look the river made of time and water
And remember that time is another river,
Know that we are lost as the river
And that faces go like water.
Jorge Luis Borges
You made me remember Borges with your letters
Cruz del Sur
I’m glad that I helped you remember Borges. Thanks for the comment.
Nice poem! I wrote two looong posts about the mystery of time because I am always haunted by it.
Time is a fascinating topic. I’ll have to checkout your posts.